Military veteran, survivalist, and now transmigrator?!
While driving to meet some old military friends to go camping with. 33-year-old Dante Santos finds himself mysteriously transported to the world of Edythe. A mystical world populated with only women and where men are thought of as only mythical beings. At a glance, this world may seem like every man’s fantasy, but there lie many dangers in this paradise. From monstrous creatures that prowl the lands, to sinister individuals who scheme in the shadows. It’ll take everything Dante has to adapt and overcome all which Edythe has to offer as well as to find out why he was brought here.
This is my first story so any and all constructive criticisms are welcome!
Updates once a week on Thursday. Also if you want more my site (https://jdeuswebserials.wordpress.com/)will be one chapter ahead of others, so do check it out.I also post on Scribble and Royal Road as well.
Volume 1:
sunul-ecnal
There are a few errors here and there, but so far seems really interesting
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