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1186951105 commented Ch 1 Introduction
LMAOOOO last time I was here, this was an actual novel and I was giving YOU writing tips hahahaha glad you're learning and hope u get to complete a novel (if u still wish to do so)
1186951105 commented Ch 1 Visitors Old and New
interesting start! looking forward to next chapters. hope you're able to both represent LGBT+ people well while remaining consistent with the time period :) good luck
1186951105 commented Ch 11 11. The Politics of Spellcraft
waddup mate. you good? hope ur safe bud
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1186951105 commented Ch 11 11. The Politics of Spellcraft
still here bro
1186951105 commented Ch 11 11. The Politics of Spellcraft
hi. hope u haven't given up on this coz somebody's waiting for an update
1186951105 commented Chapter Deleted
hi just wondering when u gonna update this? hope ur okay
1186951105 commented Ch 1 Side Character
Also, the tenses. Past? Present? Stick to one, bud. :) But yeah, I think I kinda see where you're tryina go.
1186951105 commented Ch 1 Side Character
Also, the tenses. Past? Present? Stick to one, bud. :) But yeah, I think I kinda see where you're tryina go.
1186951105 commented Ch 1 Side Character
The italics are over done; it's kinda confusing. Are these narrations? Are these thoughts? Both?